## Summary
The revision matches the supplied SHA-256 in its run index and resolves every recorded stage-02 requirement: exact config/profile matrix, sealed direct OpenAI transport, opaque wire aliases, surface-owned crash state, prepared-weekly pin loading, both adaptive producers, canonical daily replay, strict Unicode/YAML handling, and wrapper/full-suite/rollback gates. It retains genuinely open Korean prose only within typed local slots, with deterministic whole-candidate rejection and canonical/no-edit fallback; one new MEDIUM proof-matrix inconsistency needs correction before promotion.

## Claims
- The target run index records `stage-03-revision.md` with SHA-256 `ba255a37b8487026c614fff06de79e84460e0b19d548913568aa273e88a4f0d1`.
- The stage-02 critic's nine required changes are explicitly closed by the revision's config, transport, opaque-wire, durability, weekly-loader, adaptive-producer, daily-replay, parser, and wrapper/live/rollback sections.
- The stage-02 architect's ambient-SDK finding is resolved by preconstruction environment rejection, explicit OpenAI arguments, certifi TLS, pinned host/path transport, `trust_env=False`, redirects disabled, and hostile-environment tests.
- The previous cross-store journal concern is resolved: daily state is in the finalized EventStore, weekly state is in the schedule ledger, adaptive state is in the publication ledger; audit is terminal metadata only.

## Analysis
The four typed surfaces are bounded to local manifests and fixed slots, while headings, facts, decisions, actions, safety/approval/delivery claims, buttons, envelopes, and all bytes outside slots remain canonical. The plan has explicit one-request/no-retry behavior, fsync-before-call claims, late-result fencing, restart canonicalization, pin checks, default-off startup behavior, and no generic/Kimi/auxiliary route. This is proportional to the existing independent durability domains (`gateway/platforms/telegram.py`, profile `customer_schedule.py`, and `gateway/platforms/nutrition_coaching.py`) rather than adding an authoritative cross-store journal.

The strongest antithesis remains that arbitrary Korean prose cannot be semantically proven harmless by lexical checks. The revision correctly does not claim that proof; it limits the model to presentation slots, makes all validation failures canonical, uses shadow evidence, and keeps rollout separately human-approved. A finite phrase catalog or whole-body rewrite would respectively violate the free-prose decision or immutable-anchor boundary.

## Root Cause
The remaining defect is a proof-matrix arithmetic mismatch: P1/P2 enable weekly in both profile copies as well as daily and two adaptive grammars, but the live gate names only four coordinator paths.

## Findings
- MEDIUM (reported P2): `stage-03-revision.md:92-93,239` enables five profile/surface combinations in P1/P2—physique daily, physique weekly, physique adaptive, dualcoachtest weekly, dualcoachtest adaptive—while the controlled proof executes only four paths × 12 manifests = 48 requests. One independently implemented weekly profile path therefore lacks live shadow evidence. Require five paths × 12 = 60, or reduce P1/P2 to four paths and gate the omitted path separately before promotion.

## Recommendations
1. Correct the controlled proof and P1/P2 evidence wording to cover every enabled profile/surface path, with per-path one-request/outcome assertions.
2. Retain the sealed OpenAI-only coordinator, typed local adapters, surface-owned durable claims, and canonical-only replay; do not reintroduce generic provider resolution, Kimi/Moonshot, retries, repair calls, or a feature journal.
3. Keep the existing full wrapper suite, both profile suites, strict audit, marker collection, and stop/wait/canonical-finalize/disabled-restart rollback gates.

## Architectural Status
WATCH

## Code Review Recommendation
COMMENT

## Tradeoffs
- Five-path/60-call proof: validates both independently implemented weekly profile paths; modestly increases controlled-live cost.
- Four-path/48-call proof: lower cost but cannot substantiate the configured P1/P2 rollout for both weekly copies.