## Summary
The revision closes the prior OpenAI-only, finite-output, receipt, authority, and narrow-playbook design gaps, and its immutable SHA-256 matches the revision entry in `index.jsonl`: `61be908cf4280f035f1060ac5270b614b4e335790037856640b51e02e17b61e0`.

It remains blocked because its daily render boundary both requires a frozen typed input and directs callers to pass an untyped finalized snapshot mapping. That contradicts the plan's own mapping-rejection rule and leaves a raw data path into grounding unspecified.

## Claims
- The reviewed artifact is stage-02 revision for run `2098aaed-2367-4cab-8629-a0e5c5c8203f`; `.gjc/_session-019f8455-334a-7000-99ca-318dfd0e06b1/plans/ralplan/2098aaed-2367-4cab-8629-a0e5c5c8203f/index.jsonl` records the requested SHA-256.
- Revision 2 adds an exact OpenAI-family stage gate with zero-request rejection, finite ID-only stage outputs, a bounded receipt, doctrine-copy parity, and three bounded playbooks (stage-02-revision.md:86-91).
- Existing daily callers currently provide dictionaries from `PhysiqueCheckinBridge.finalized_coaching_snapshot`; the producer returns a dict with multiple free-text fields, including `optional_note` and `operator_note` (gateway/platforms/physique_checkin.py:459-483). Existing `_humanize_korean_copy` takes only `surface, canonical` (gateway/platforms/telegram.py:6100-6113).
- The existing humanizer response boundary is UTF-8-byte based, not code-point based (gateway/platforms/korean_humanizer.py:92).

## Analysis
### Spec compliance
The revision appropriately narrows the model from free-form coaching prose to selected, code-owned semantic atoms and variants. That deterministically prevents an LLM from adding actions, timings, safety claims, or unsupported doctrine. Its dedicated OpenAI stage transport isolates the new pipeline while preserving existing ordinary-completion behavior; the stated no-retry and canonical fallback semantics remain narrow.

The daily ingress remains underspecified and internally contradictory. The public interface rejects direct mappings, yet revision item 2 says daily call sites pass a finalized snapshot mapping to a parameter that must be an exact frozen type. In current code that mapping contains raw free-text answer values. A conversion boundary must exist before the humanizer accepts `grounding_input`; otherwise an implementation must either relax the intended type boundary or derive grounding from an arbitrary mapping. Neither path deterministically satisfies the fail-closed/raw-record exclusion contract.

The transport-size wording is also not deterministic for multibyte Korean JSON. “4,096-character” and “one-byte overflow” specify different predicates, and existing code uses UTF-8 bytes.

### Antithesis
Avoiding a daily wrapper appears smaller because `finalized_coaching_snapshot` is already a bounded dictionary. It is not sufficient: bounded length is not a nominal trust type, and the mapping still contains user-entered free-text fields outside the declared verified-memory set. A small frozen factory at the gateway boundary is less scope than adding a parser or broad sanitization downstream.

### Constructive synthesis
Keep the file scope unchanged. Define a frozen `DailyGroundingInput` plus a `from_finalized_snapshot(snapshot)` factory in the selected gateway/profile boundary. It must validate the exact finalized schema and retain only code-derived comparison, committed adjustment, and next-check-time fields. `_humanize_korean_copy` accepts only that object; conversion failure returns canonical before the stage transport. Add tests that raw mappings and malformed fields produce canonical with zero client calls. Declare all response ceilings as UTF-8 bytes (or Unicode code points) consistently and test multibyte Korean boundary values.

## Root Cause
The original free-form snapshot dictionary remains conflated with the new trusted typed-grounding boundary. The revision describes the desired type but does not define the required daily conversion from the existing dict-producing API.

## Findings
1. HIGH — `stage-02-revision.md:87`: Define the daily frozen input conversion before the humanizer boundary. Reported as P1. Impact: the plan contradicts its own direct-mapping prohibition and can expose raw free-text snapshot values to grounding. Fix: name a fail-closed frozen factory, exact fields, and zero-call rejection tests.
2. MEDIUM — `stage-02-revision.md:89`: Specify one unit for structured-response limits. Reported as P2. Impact: multibyte Korean JSON has non-deterministic accept/reject behavior under the current wording. Fix: state UTF-8 bytes or code points consistently for both limits and test Korean boundary cases.

## Recommendations
1. Resolve the P1 typed-daily-input contradiction before implementation; retain the three-surface scope and use a narrow conversion factory rather than new persistence or retrieval.
2. Resolve the P2 unit ambiguity before writing transport tests.
3. After those changes, preserve the revision's explicit OpenAI gate, atom/variant allowlists, byte-identical profile parity, receipt privacy assertions, ordered two-call tests, and zero-call grounding-failure tests.

## Architectural Status
BLOCK

## Code Review Recommendation
REQUEST CHANGES

## Tradeoffs
- Frozen daily factory: adds one narrow conversion type and deterministic fail-closed validation; prevents raw mappings from crossing into grounding. Recommended.
- Direct snapshot mapping: slightly fewer lines but violates the declared trusted-input contract and leaves raw-text handling ambiguous. Reject.
- UTF-8-byte limits: aligns with the existing humanizer and supports one-byte-overflow tests. Recommended if backward consistency is preferred.
- Unicode-code-point limits: human-readable but requires replacing byte-oriented existing checks and differently defined overflow tests.