# Critic Counter-Review Pass 2 — Dual-coach model rerun

## Artifact binding
- Reviewed revision: `/home/cube/projects/richard/traning coach/.gjc/_session-019fabef-8dbb-7000-aec7-3d99dcdecc96/plans/ralplan/dual-coach-model-rerun/stage-02-revision.md`
- Revision SHA-256: `63f00dad909cba9f25e1094fa2d204a7b8407e42d59374dda080d9c2896a7be4`
- Prior Planner: `/home/cube/projects/richard/traning coach/.gjc/_session-019fabe7-62cd-7000-b761-e040602b488c/plans/ralplan/dual-coach-model-rerun/stage-01-planner.md`
- Prior Critic: `/home/cube/projects/richard/traning coach/.gjc/_session-019fabeb-7cf5-7000-9f0b-02bb9bda5d82/plans/ralplan/dual-coach-model-rerun/stage-01-critic.md`
- Current-pass Architect receipt consumed: `/home/cube/projects/richard/traning coach/.gjc/_session-019fabf3-13f5-7000-b302-47e280734977/plans/ralplan/dual-coach-model-rerun/stage-02-architect.md`, SHA-256 `514cef5815709fc65624a771742f287b2e085370e045006e0d8d23d2aea286a8`, `WATCH` / `COMMENT`

## Verdict
**OKAY**

## Summary
Pass-2 delta resolves every blocking Critic pass-1 contract and preserves the approved scope. The Architect's remaining MEDIUM/P2 request to name the risk-policy owner, artifact path/schema, and verifier is a legitimate implementation-handoff comment, but it does not warrant another planning revision because the revision already fixes the policy's executable behavior, identity, fail-closed behavior, digest, and verification cases.

## Delta-only assessment
- **History contract resolved:** revision sequencing step 1 selects a narrow immutable schema-1 admission rule, schema-2 typed manifest equality, append-only source-day reconciliation, and fail-closed disagreement without rewriting events or changing revision/epoch.
- **Lifecycle authority resolved:** sequencing step 2 assigns canonical source facts to the canonical transaction and all baseline/strategy/review/approval/activation/delivery lifecycle to `AdaptiveEventStore`, with exact-tuple dedupe and crash reconciliation rather than recency arbitration.
- **Reminder contract resolved:** sequencing step 5 specifies the only eligible static template, reservation key, fences, immediate response recheck, delivered-plus-sent-audited evidence, terminal unknown behavior, deadline, and deterministic non-response key.
- **Risk and host contract resolved:** sequencing step 4 fixes all six normalization bands, integer-sum formula, inclusive `>=4` threshold, hard overrides, reason codes, missing-evidence hold, policy version/digest, and candidate preimage. The plan also corrects the projection anchor and names the gateway files and focused tests.

## Counter-review of Architect P2
The Architect correctly observes that `dual-coach-risk-v1` does not yet name a durable file/schema, approving role, or exact verification function. Requiring ITERATE would nevertheless be scope inflation under the pass-2 ratchet: Critic pass 1 required an executable formula/value/version/reason/dedupe contract, and revision 2 supplies it. The plan also fails closed when the policy artifact is missing, invalid, or ambiguous, persists its canonical JSON digest, prevents activation/delivery, and includes policy-digest-change verification. Those constraints prevent silent self-approval or policy drift while leaving ordinary implementation placement and ownership naming to the implementation handoff.

This comment should be closed before evaluator activation, as the Architect recommends, but it is not a missing behavior, safety boundary, or unresolved prior HIGH blocker. No novelty-justified blocker was exposed by the revision, so monotonicity and severity discipline favor `OKAY`, not `ITERATE`.

## Findings
No blocking findings. The Architect's remaining P2 governance comment is accepted as non-blocking implementation guidance.

## Decision
`OKAY` — do not request a third planning revision for the risk-policy custody detail.

## Consensus status
Critic is `OKAY` on revision SHA `63f00dad909cba9f25e1094fa2d204a7b8407e42d59374dda080d9c2896a7be4`. Run-level consensus is not yet established under the stated contract because the same-revision Architect verdict is `WATCH` / `COMMENT`, not `CLEAR` / `APPROVE`; this does not convert the non-blocking P2 into a Critic iteration request.

Verification: planning-only delta counter-review. No tests or implementation actions were run.